OK, I'll try one more time. There is an object out there. Photons bounce off object and hit retina. Retina sends axons from ganglion cells to lateral geneiculate nucleus, then to occipital cortex, etc.
That constitutes a causal chain of neruons that process visual information.
If you confuse the processing of information within that causal chain with indirect realism (formation of percepts through neural processing) and do not allow the causal chain to explain perception, then direct realism is only possible through one other approach -- a homonculus. Does that make sense?
Visual information is processed throughout that causal chain, but the process is still compatible with direct realism for some definitions of direct realism. It depends on precisely what definition you use. The early implication you cited of "immediate awareness" as part of direct realism is not comapatible with neural processing, but only with a homonculus model. Only a homonculus could be immediately aware of anything. A brain takes time to make sense of sensory data.
You are saying nothing whatsoever about ontology. You aren't engaging with the argument at all. The things you are describing have nothing to do with this argument. I keep telling you this.
No, the brain in a vat example says nothing about ontology. It is an exercise in epistemology. If we assume a particular metaphysical position -- say materialism -- and agree that direct realism can account for our means of perception (agreeing that this simply means that there is a causal chain of neurons that results in our ability to perceive the world), then the BIV example shows only that something can intervene within that causal chain to fool us. It means that even with direct realism we can be fooled. Unless you define direct realism to mean that we always have perfect fidelity in our perceptions, which doesn't make any sense to me. That we can be fooled with hallucinations does not imply that there is some other intermediate form of perception that we perceive through a higher-order homonculus (indirect reality), but that there is an intervening chain of neurons which can be accessed and fooled through some intervening means. But we still perceive the world directly through that causal chain.