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Kevin, Mary:
I think that most readers here realise that you're a formible dialectical tag team.
And within that framework of rigorous, science-first approach that you apply, I'd like to look at the issue of Mignini being a "fat-faced wino pervert".
Science is all about observation, let me see if a grasshopper like me can reach your heights:
"fat-faced" - well, okay, there is an abundant set of terminology for one's physical appearance as regards weight, and I will admit that Mignini is not anorexic. I'll concede this description, although the nuance isn't necessarily flattering.
"wino" - do you have any data to back up this one? Even Douglas Preston recognises Mignini as being a Christian family man (although that doesn't necessarily mean that one doesn't drink too much). I haven't seen any text or visual references to Mignini being a drinking man.
(on the other hand, for the sake of fairness, there are photos of both generations of the Mellas family enjoying alcohol. And Amanda's step-father's MySpace page had a small collection of photos of apparently enebriated persons vomiting, before it was set to private)
"pervert" - again, I see no references to perversions on Mignini's part. If you look at his case history, he has prosecuted tax-evaders, horse traders, extorsioners, etc. with no perverse element in his activity, as far as I can see. Of course, you will probably bring up The Monster of Florence killings, however, those belong to a different jurisdiction and he never prosecuted there (MoF investigator Giuttari knew of occultist Carlizzi years before the reactivation of the Narducci case, and it was Giuttari's investigative data that was handed to Mignini re. Narducci). If you read Mario Spezi's book rather than Preston's, you'll see that the "satanic" theory associated with MoF predates the peripheral involvement of Mignini through the Narducci case by many years, and that it's Giuttari and others who developed that theory)
So, going back to your triple slammer description of Mignini, maybe you should only leave him with a rounded face.