Just because in hindsight we can identify things we could have done better does not mean that the initial results weren't positive. And you know this. In fact, the initial results would have to be positive to support your previous narrative that Hillary was trying to selfishly capitalize on those initial results. That narrative can only paint Hillary in a bad light if she's trying to steal the thunder. Your views are not consistent-- aside from your adamant insistence that everything is Hillary's or Obama's fault.
The sad thing is that I've really read very little compared with the available literature. Yet it's exceedingly clear that I've read far, far more than the average person commenting on various articles or message boards. And that's just depressing. Regarding Hillary, aside from the never-ending smattering of articles from various daily/weekly/monthly publications, including everything from the New York Times to The Economist to Foreign Policy, I've read a small handful of books:
1. Alter Egos: This analyzes and contrasts Obama's and Hillary's views on foreign policy. It also describes the contents of some of Hillary's emails to better understand how the State Department worked during her time. One of the interesting take aways is that Hillary and Obama actually were able to work together quite effectively early on, while members of their teams were far more bitter toward one another. This isn't surprising regarding Hillary's team, given the intense loyalty that defines so-called "Hillary Land." But it was interesting that Obama's team felt equally hurt by Hillary. Another interesting take away is that Obama tended to listen to and appreciate Hilary's advice more and more over the course of her time as Secretary of State. I think this speaks well of Hillary's good qualities-- she's a voracious reader who works extremely hard to always be well prepared, knowledgeable, and thoughtful-- just as it speaks well of Obama, given his ability to consider and appreciate oppositional argument even where he was deeply idealistically skeptical. Obama deserves the same praise for this open mindedness that Bush deserves when he cast aside his economic ideals, listened to his economic advisers, and then worked diligently to build support for market intervention.
2. The Secretary: This book is written by a member of the traveling press corps who flew around the world with Secretary Clinton. It isn't quite as technical a study as Alter Egos is, but it is a more humanized read that better describes the intense pressure and overwhelmingly difficult challenges the State Department faced in foreign policy. It's also fascinating because the author was not born in the west and was brought up to believe a very much conspiratorial view of the world in which the west-- namely, the US-- controlled the puppet strings of the world and was ultimately responsible for many of the world's problems. This books is just as much about the author's intellectual journey as it is about Secretary Clinton. No matter, it strongly bolsters some of the themes noted in Alter Egos, especially Hillary's work ethic, desire to succeed, and voracious reading apatite.
3. A Woman in Charge: This is a biography of Hillary written by a well respected investigative journalist who hasn't exactly been kind to the Clintons over the years. I was sold after reading multiple comments from reviewers cautioning that neither Clinton lovers nor haters would like the book. Again, it paints a picture of Hillary that generally re-enforces what you can gather from Alter Egos and The Secretary. But it digs far deeper into Hillary's past, and, for me, offers much needed to context to understand Hillary's deep resentment of the GOP, beltway media, and electorate.
All of these are authored by non-partisan, investigative journalists. That's very important to me. I don't have time for hack jobs or hand jobs. And there's an awful lot of each concerning Hillary-- though there's clearly far more hack jobs.
I'd like to read more, but for now, I've moved on from Hillary as a general topic. I've been focusing on Trump instead.
ETA: I should add that when I started trying to learn more about Hillary, I held relatively strong anti-Hillary views. They aren't nearly as strong now. While I think she has serious flaws, it's clear she has some very strong qualities as well. And if I want to be honest, I have to admit that her strengths easily outweigh her flaws. And so that's my new opinion. I was wrong before. Oh well.