Matthew Best
Penultimate Amazing
No ignorance sweetcheeks- pay attention and read slower this time.
I know he was asked by the police but as i have said numerous times, thats another story altogether
Sure it is.
No ignorance sweetcheeks- pay attention and read slower this time.
I know he was asked by the police but as i have said numerous times, thats another story altogether
He obviously doesn´t have any experience with kidnapping,
Gosh, I don't know, someone who doesn't want to bring a note with him that might be easier to trace back to someone outside the home?Who breaks into an occupied house for a kidnapping intending to write a ransom note after he gets there using whatever pen and paper he can find?
How long does Emily Post recommend?Here's why I read the ransom note as fake:
* It's way too long.
It seems to me that everything that's said in the note has a purpose; what is it that you think would have made the note sound more legitimate if it had been left out?* It says far too many things that don't need to be said in the first place. It's like in any interview situation where you keep quiet and let the interviewee keep talking. If they are deceptive, they keep going and going until they think they have been convincing.
Could be, but if so it would only suggest that the writer of the note was attempting to be deceptive, perhaps to conceal his identity, not that there wasn't a real ransom demand.* There were two misspellings (Bussiness and posession) in the first paragraph that seem deliberate. For the most part the rest of the document uses proper grammar and punctuation. The choice of vocabulary (faction, attache, countermeasures, exhausting) doesn't seem consistent with not knowing how to spell business. It seems like the misspelling idea fell to the wayside after the first paragraph.
How short was the list? Maybe whoever wrote the note heard the amount third-hand, and didn't think he'd be on any such list the police compiled.* Why ask for the amount of the guy's bonus and reveal that you're on the short list of people who knew the amount of the bonus.
As I say, maybe the original intent was to ask for more, but once the kidnapper had decided not to leave the house with the child, he thought it prudent to settle for an amount that could presumably be readily raised by writing a check, rather than one which would require liquidating assets.* Why ask for such a small amount of money? Obviously they had plenty of money, especially with a bonus that large.
I suspect the "foreign faction" is fictitious, but again this only indicates an attempt to disguise motive, not that the writer isn't making a real ransom demand.* What's with all this stuff about a foreign faction and his business? It makes no sense.
To show that you know they HAVE the money in their account available to withdraw, and will not be receptive to excuses that "I need time to raise the money."* Why tell them to withdraw the money from their account? Seems odd. Just come up with the money. Who cares how?
Suggests that you are watching them, and want to see them go into the bank with an attache which can be used to walk out with the cash that has been requested.* Why tell them to bring an attache to the bank?
Are you serious? Why not? Why use a comma? Why use a dollar sign?* Why use decimal places ($118,000.00)?
Again, to forestall excuses. If the kidnapper planned some movie-style scavenger hunt from one location to the next to make it more likely he'd be able to retrieve the money without being captured, who's to say that being "well rested" isn't good advice?* Why advise them to be well rested because the drop will be exhausting?
Not something a parent would be likely to write, but something likely to terrorize a parent.* What's with the reference to beheading?
Carelessness? Is there any reason to think the "foreign faction" was real, and "we" was ever appropriate?* Why switch from first person plural to singular (we, I)?
A lie intended to make the claim that the girl was still alive more convincing.* Why point out that there are "two gentleman" guarding the daughter?
A lie intended to make the claim that the girl was being treated well more convincing.* Why use the phrase "watching over" the daughter?
Perhaps, or perhaps they just don't want him to be wearing a tracking device that will make it easier for authorities to follow his movements remotely.* They say they will scan him for electronic devices. Do they plan to make the exchange in person?
It has a menacing tone, like "I know more about you than you think. I may be someone close. You can't trust anyone, so you'd better do what I say and not try to plan with your friends how to catch me."* What's with all the "John" stuff in the last paragraph?
Obviously, at the time the last note was being written, the person writing it knows it isn't real. The girl is dead; she will not be ransomed.Individually these things mean little. Collectively it sounds like somebody is putting together a ransom note they are desperate to be believed because they know it's not real.
You gave an appeal to emotion- nothing more
Not to mention that this is all a bit circular. If you start with the premise that how they acted is suspicious, then they are going to be suspects. And if you suspect that they killed their daughter, you are going to believe they acted suspiciously.
Thats only part of it
Huh? I think you watch too much TV. Shorting of leaving a monogrammed pen and using paper that reads, "From the Desk of UncaYimmy" nobody is going to trace anything back to you. At best they might find the paper and pen consistent with something you already own. However, at that point you're screwed anyway.Gosh, I don't know, someone who doesn't want to bring a note with him that might be easier to trace back to someone outside the home?
Which would mean what? Go ahead and say it. We all know the answer. It would mean...c'mon...the note was a fake.And how do you know that's what happened? Maybe he DID bring a note from home, but after the girl died whatever was in that original note no longer seemed like a good idea.
Probably 90% of it. "We have your daughter. If you want to see her alive again, you need to give us $500,000. We will call you Tuesday morning between 8 and 10. Do not involve the police or try to find us yourself or she will be harmed or killed. We'll be watching you."It seems to me that everything that's said in the note has a purpose; what is it that you think would have made the note sound more legitimate if it had been left out?
You don't conceal yourself by revealing that you know the person's surname, given name, his southern accent, and the amount of his bonus. Doing so eliminates a few billion possible suspects.Could be, but if so it would only suggest that the writer of the note was attempting to be deceptive, perhaps to conceal his identity, not that there wasn't a real ransom demand.
If 68 people were on that list, that's 0.000001% of the population. I'd call that a short list, wouldn't you? Unless, of course, you're arguing that the person overheard a conversation in a bar that John Ramsey of 1313 Mockingbird Lane just got a $118,000 bonus and has a six year old daughter.How short was the list? Maybe whoever wrote the note heard the amount third-hand, and didn't think he'd be on any such list the police compiled.
I see. So, when the kidnapping was real, they would ask for an unrealistic amount of money, but when the kidnapping was fake, they would ask for a realistic amount. That makes a lot of sense.As I say, maybe the original intent was to ask for more, but once the kidnapper had decided not to leave the house with the child, he thought it prudent to settle for an amount that could presumably be readily raised by writing a check, rather than one which would require liquidating assets.
How does the person know the money is in the account? Does he know for a fact that Ramsey has already received the bonus in a lump sum and that he has deposited into his account and the check has already cleared? He knows it wasn't a stock related bonus or a bonus paid out over time? And he knows that no taxes were taken out of the $118,000? And he assumes this guy who owns multiple homes, airplanes and servants has no other easily liquidated assets? He can't borrow the money quickly?To show that you know they HAVE the money in their account available to withdraw, and will not be receptive to excuses that "I need time to raise the money."
Right. It's not like they could walk into and out of the bank with an empty attache, huh?Suggests that you are watching them, and want to see them go into the bank with an attache which can be used to walk out with the cash that has been requested.
Who includes a cents column when asking for $118,000? It's odd, especially since the author didn't do it a second time. It doesn't fit with the style of writing in the rest of the document. It was a further attempt to make people think the person wasn't all that bright.Are you serious? Why not? Why use a comma? Why use a dollar sign?
Sure. "Sorry, Jonbenet, but Daddy is too sleepy to drive another 30 miles to rescue his little princess. If only the kidnappers had told me to rest up I would have skipped my YMCA league basketball game last night!"Again, to forestall excuses. If the kidnapper planned some movie-style scavenger hunt from one location to the next to make it more likely he'd be able to retrieve the money without being captured, who's to say that being "well rested" isn't good advice?
Back in 1996, when did anybody ever talk about beheading people. It's exceedingly rare and totally unnecessary.Not something a parent would be likely to write, but something likely to terrorize a parent.
Right. Careless. Somebody was trying to convince people it was real.Carelessness? Is there any reason to think the "foreign faction" was real, and "we" was ever appropriate?
Duh! That's what I am saying - the note was fake and intended to convince people it was real.Obviously, at the time the last note was being written, the person writing it knows it isn't real. The girl is dead; she will not be ransomed.
Who breaks into an occupied house for a kidnapping intending to write a ransom note after he gets there using whatever pen and paper he can find? You're also forgetting the crushed part of the skull and the signs of sexual abuse.
Here's why I read the ransom note as fake:
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I can't find the references now, but John was fond of using "and hence" with the same noun on each side of the equation. "Hence" is pretty rare in my speech at least. Note that "delivery" is used, and then "delivery" was used again, as per the formula, but the writer had second thoughts and crossed it out preferring "pickup" with daughter. The use of "a earlier" and "an earlier" suggests to me that the letter is being dictated, by a businessman.If we
14. monitor you getting the money early, we might call you early to
15. arrange an earlier delivery of the money and hence a earlier
16.deliverypickup of your daughter.
How do we know the amount of John Ramsey's bonus? Can someone point me to a source for this?
The ransom note: A three-page ransom note discovered by Patsy Ramsey contains several bizarre statements, including a claim that the kidnappers are part of a "small foreign faction." The ransom amount of $118,000 matches John Ramsey's 1996 bonus from his company. Also puzzling is the sign-off of the writer, "SBTC," the meaning of which investigators have never settled on.
It turns out that reference I was looking for is in fact in the link I gave.I can't find the references now, but John was fond of using "and hence" with the same noun on each side of the equation.
This guy[SIZE=+1], [/SIZE][SIZE=+1]McClish[/SIZE], is pretty good:
http://www.statementanalysis.com/ramseynote/
The ransom amount of $118,000 matches John Ramsey's 1996 bonus from his company.
Probably 90% of it. "We have your daughter. If you want to see her alive again, you need to give us $500,000. We will call you Tuesday morning between 8 and 10. Do not involve the police or try to find us yourself or she will be harmed or killed. We'll be watching you."
Somebody pointed out that "and hence" is not proper since hence by itself is sufficient. Turns out the Pat Ramsey used "and hence" either in the speech or in the printed materials at the memorial service. She explained that perhaps she used it because she had seen it so many times in the days before.I can't find the references now, but John was fond of using "and hence" with the same noun on each side of the equation. "Hence" is pretty rare in my speech at least.
The word "hence" is not a very common word. When was the last time you used that word in a sentence? Chances are you have not used it this week. We should look to see if this word appears in any writings of John or Patsy Ramsey. Well, it does. On December 14, 1997, the First United Methodist Church in Boulder, Colorado held a memorial service for JonBenet. In the program, there was "A Christmas Message from the Ramsey Family." This message was also posted on the Ramsey family's web site. In the message, we find the statement, "Had there been no birth of Christ, there would be no hope of eternal life, and, hence, no hope of ever being with our loved ones again."
How do they know?
The puzzling $118,000 ransom amount was the same figure as the annual bonus Ramsey received late last year from his company, Access Graphics, according to family spokesman Pat Korten.
"Very few" people other than John Ramsey would know the bonus amount, said Access Graphics Vice President Laurie Wagner.
.....That's because, according to John Ramsey in his book, the $118,117.50 was deferred compensation awarded in January 1996.
That means, Ramsey wrote, that the figure was printed on every pay stub issued him in 1996. Therefore, a December pay stub laying around the house would have contained the figure, even though it was awarded to him at the beginning of the year.