Interesting Ian
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You don't seem to have taken a great deal of attention as to what I said in my previous post.
Then very clearly neither is any other law! There is nothing magical about gravity as compared to any other law!
If gravity is no respecter of free will then you are presupposing the falsity of materialism. As I say I don't agree that my article is inappropriate in this respect. Other people would need to agree with you.
I don't understand what is wrong with using "that".
I've done that. If I've failed then at least I've tried the very best I can. I am not in agreement with your criticisms.
Confusion?? If people are confused then there is nothing I can do about that. I've explained myself as clearly as I am able to. Explaining myself even more simply is beyond my ability.
{sighs} Don't be so utterly preposterous.
If you can think of anyway else to explain my ideas then go right ahead. Since I very strongly suspect you don't even understand what I'm saying you can therefore be in no position to ascertain whether it is appropriate or not. Nevertheless feel free to offer a better way of explaining. I know from bitter experience then if I don't use some metaphor then people are absolutely clueless as to what I'm talking about. So go ahead and try to explain my ideas without using any metaphors/analogies.
I've already explained this. If I started to say if one started to mess about with the innards, apart from the tuner, and not messing so much that the picture disappears completely, it makes it needlessly complex. I'm very far from convinced that this is a good idea. Give me an example as to what you think that paragraph should like like, then I can decide.
I'm very open to any suggestions as to how I can better explain my ideas. I could use another metaphor such as videophones, but on the whole I thought TV sets were better. I know from past experience that if I do not use any metaphor, then people are absolutely clueless as to what I'm talking about. At least Skeptics are. Never tried anyone else.
You're being seriously idiotic in your suggestion that my writing is somehow archaic
Anyway, nothing I can do about that, it's simply the way I communicate. If there are any words which you feel I ought not to use, or if there is anything else you feel is inappropriate, then please be more specific rather than simply asserting my writing is archaic.
Well, if a person threw himself of a roof, it would seem strange to my ears if someone commented "I wish that person would behave himself". When discussing the behaviour of people it is normally taken for granted we are not referring to something like falling down a flight of stairs, but rather voluntary behaviour.
I'm beginning to feel you're being rather silly in your criticisms.
Anyone who is interested in such questions. It's not for me to say a certain sex or age etc will be more interested.
Sam, hope you don't my me saying this, but if they think like you then I'm completely wasting my time and I might as well just give up on it now. I have to assume that there are people who don't think like you. If other people do think like you, then I would have absolutely no idea how to express my ideas. Indeed I strongly suspect it would be impossible.
No that was due to an error on my part. Did you not read my response? He thought the original article was referring to us rather than man-made machines.
If you're right I feel seriously depressed. Just my fervent hope that most people are not like you otherwise I'm simply wasting my time.
If I cannot communicate effectively then I agree I'm simply wasting my time. Indeed I'm wasting my time communicating on these fora.
Actually I think my writing in explaining philosophical ideas is much better than other stuff on the Net, so no temptation at all for me to plagerise. Anyway, these are my ideas. If I'm simply copying ideas from someone else, then what is the point of creating a website??
I think I'll do that. I think that Skeptics tend to be particularly stupid in this subject area. Being realistic I'm not going to persuade any of them. I might as well try to persuade a concrete block.
I can't keep revising it for evermore. This constitutes maybe about 5% of the stuff I'll be writing. I'll make a few minir adjustments, but I won't be rewriting it. If people do not understand what I'm talking about, then so be it. I've tried my very best.
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Yes, I would stress intentionality and I would remove all mention of gravity precisely because it is no respecter of free will.
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Then very clearly neither is any other law! There is nothing magical about gravity as compared to any other law!
If gravity is no respecter of free will then you are presupposing the falsity of materialism. As I say I don't agree that my article is inappropriate in this respect. Other people would need to agree with you.
"..such laws THAT we have observed?" No. "such...as ", but this sort of construction is what I meant about the 18th century style. Nobody talks like this. Why write like it?
I don't understand what is wrong with using "that".
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Ian it is precisely your (self imposed) task to make sure that as many readers as possible DO understand you.
I've done that. If I've failed then at least I've tried the very best I can. I am not in agreement with your criticisms.
This means you must try to forestall and clarify that confusion. This is not an easy task. Do you think you will get it right in a first draft?
Confusion?? If people are confused then there is nothing I can do about that. I've explained myself as clearly as I am able to. Explaining myself even more simply is beyond my ability.
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You say (in your reply) that "we feel we are different from all other objects in the universe" Well, I disagree,
{sighs} Don't be so utterly preposterous.
I fear you won't sell me on the TV analogy,
If you can think of anyway else to explain my ideas then go right ahead. Since I very strongly suspect you don't even understand what I'm saying you can therefore be in no position to ascertain whether it is appropriate or not. Nevertheless feel free to offer a better way of explaining. I know from bitter experience then if I don't use some metaphor then people are absolutely clueless as to what I'm talking about. So go ahead and try to explain my ideas without using any metaphors/analogies.
because any way you look at it, you can (and indeed almost certainly will) change the programme if you fiddle randomly with the insides. (Not, as you say, the content of the program which is fixed elsewhere, but you definitely could change the channel and how could you tell if the program you find yourself watching was the one you would have seen had you not fiddled with the works?)
I've already explained this. If I started to say if one started to mess about with the innards, apart from the tuner, and not messing so much that the picture disappears completely, it makes it needlessly complex. I'm very far from convinced that this is a good idea. Give me an example as to what you think that paragraph should like like, then I can decide.
It introduces an avoidable ambiguity to your explanation, which is a point of potential weakness. It's always a risk with analogy. You have to decide if the metaphor has enough explanatory power to justify the potential confusion. I don't think it has. Your call of course. I wonder what others think?
I'm very open to any suggestions as to how I can better explain my ideas. I could use another metaphor such as videophones, but on the whole I thought TV sets were better. I know from past experience that if I do not use any metaphor, then people are absolutely clueless as to what I'm talking about. At least Skeptics are. Never tried anyone else.
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Re the 18th century style, yes , it was Berkeley I was referring to.
I'm more a Hutcheson, Hume and Hutton man. The Scots enlightenment produced plenty freethinkers, (many of them correspondents of Berkeley),but they all tended to write the same stilted prose- Johnsonian in style , but lacking his acid touch- which they got from thinking in Latin half the time, while guzzling gallons of claret. The sonorous polysyllables roll convincingly and authoritatively off the tongue...see? You've got me doing it now. It's addictive, but (I feel) offputting to the youthful novice. Be cool. Be hip. You feel this is relevant to the twenty first century. Write like you live in it.
You're being seriously idiotic in your suggestion that my writing is somehow archaic
A writer can't help bringing unconscious assumptions into his work (Good teachers are have learned this , through bitter experience, and change their ways accordingly). For example, you assume your readers will know that by human behaviour you mean conscious behaviour,
Well, if a person threw himself of a roof, it would seem strange to my ears if someone commented "I wish that person would behave himself". When discussing the behaviour of people it is normally taken for granted we are not referring to something like falling down a flight of stairs, but rather voluntary behaviour.
I'm beginning to feel you're being rather silly in your criticisms.
Who are your target audience?
Anyone who is interested in such questions. It's not for me to say a certain sex or age etc will be more interested.
You hope to educate them; you must then have some expectation of what mental baggage they are already lugging. Will they think more like you than like me?
Sam, hope you don't my me saying this, but if they think like you then I'm completely wasting my time and I might as well just give up on it now. I have to assume that there are people who don't think like you. If other people do think like you, then I would have absolutely no idea how to express my ideas. Indeed I strongly suspect it would be impossible.
I see Dymanic has just agreed with one of my points.
No that was due to an error on my part. Did you not read my response? He thought the original article was referring to us rather than man-made machines.
So I'm not alone.
If you're right I feel seriously depressed. Just my fervent hope that most people are not like you otherwise I'm simply wasting my time.
I'll certainly have a look on the net, but even if there is a more concise and clearer exposition of your points out there- would it help you to read it? I feel we learn how to write best by reading bad writing: we see how awful it is and we strive to be better.
If I cannot communicate effectively then I agree I'm simply wasting my time. Indeed I'm wasting my time communicating on these fora.
The danger with good writing is that we despair of being as good and resort to plagiarism.
Actually I think my writing in explaining philosophical ideas is much better than other stuff on the Net, so no temptation at all for me to plagerise. Anyway, these are my ideas. If I'm simply copying ideas from someone else, then what is the point of creating a website??
Nope. Reject my painstakingly considered advice. Spurn the accrued wisdom of the ages. Do your own thing and be darned to you, sirrah!
I think I'll do that. I think that Skeptics tend to be particularly stupid in this subject area. Being realistic I'm not going to persuade any of them. I might as well try to persuade a concrete block.
It's a complex subject and an ambitious project, Ian. Don't expect to get it perfect at the first draft. I bet you are still revising come Christmas. I'll be interested to see the next bit.
I can't keep revising it for evermore. This constitutes maybe about 5% of the stuff I'll be writing. I'll make a few minir adjustments, but I won't be rewriting it. If people do not understand what I'm talking about, then so be it. I've tried my very best.