This has been a persistent failing of his, he's unable to create believable characters. However more recently, since he developed greater religious tendencies, it's gotten worse and his writing has descended to fan-fiction levels.In the past, I've never had problems with the supernatural aspects of his books. I just assumed it was a horror aspect. Also, a lot of his villains in previous books were excessively over the top, i.e. evil because they were evil.
This has also been a failing of his pretty much since he started; I remember the first book of his had a plot that utterly fell apart because he left out the relativistic effects of interstellar travel. He doesn't think his plots through and often misses simple resolutions to problems that are obvious to readers.<snip> However, we are never told why the whole system is about to implode. He should have been able to manage that in a book that's over 300 pages long.
He could always just openly service the xian demographic, they seem to be willing to consume any crap offered to them. Maybe he'll do his own version of Left Behind.Frankly, were a novice writer to try to sell the manuscript of Breathless, he either (a) couldn't get an agent to represent it or (b), in the case of those rare publishing houses that still accept un-agented manuscripts, it wouldn't make it past the slush pile. In my opinion he was coasting when he wrote this one. It was guaranteed sales because of his name. He won't be able to keep pulling crap like this. As I said, even without the creationist crap, it's a very flawed piece of work.
Ah, Kehr. A walking example of crank magnetism; denies the reality of quantum mechanics and relativity, decries evolution and peddles cancer quackery (Bob Beck's variety). He also dabbles in mathematical stupidity, such as his claim that the sets of Natural and Real numbers are the same size.
Unsurprisingly Kehr is an engineer.
So what is it about engineers that makes them susceptible to woo?
That is an interesting question............. OK not all engineers (or even that many) are bible thumping idiots who think they've proved Einstein wrong but the profession does have a noted link to woostery.Okay, so what is it about engineers (at least some of them) that makes them gravitate towards woo? Many of the creation "scientists" often cited by the Institute for Creation Research (ICR) are engineers. That I can understand, since they see things as being made and don't really understand the idea of biological growth in any sophisticated manner.
Then there was this book I read parts of several years ago, written by engineers, arguing that most of the miracles in the Bible were explained by the orbit of Mars being far more elliptical in the past, with the result that it made several near passes at the earth. These resulted in a tsunami in the Red Sea, causing the sea to withdraw first, allowing the Israelites to cross the now dry seabed, followed by the tsunami itself, which drowned Pharaoh's army. Another pass caused the earthquake that destroyed the walls of Jericho. Yet another, hundreds of years later, swept a swarm of bolides into the earth's atmosphere. They missed Jerusalem, but hit Sennacherib's Assyrian army of 185,000 men, totally annihilating them.
So what is it about engineers that makes them susceptible to woo?
Okay, so what is it about engineers (at least some of them) that makes them gravitate towards woo? Many of the creation "scientists" often cited by the Institute for Creation Research (ICR) are engineers. That I can understand, since they see things as being made and don't really understand the idea of biological growth in any sophisticated manner.
Then there was this book I read parts of several years ago, written by engineers, arguing that most of the miracles in the Bible were explained by the orbit of Mars being far more elliptical in the past, with the result that it made several near passes at the earth. These resulted in a tsunami in the Red Sea, causing the sea to withdraw first, allowing the Israelites to cross the now dry seabed, followed by the tsunami itself, which drowned Pharaoh's army. Another pass caused the earthquake that destroyed the walls of Jericho. Yet another, hundreds of years later, swept a swarm of bolides into the earth's atmosphere. They missed Jerusalem, but hit Sennacherib's Assyrian army of 185,000 men, totally annihilating them.
So what is it about engineers that makes them susceptible to woo?
As an engineer, I would say that it is the hubris that grows as you begin to understand things that no one around you seems to understand. Engineers feel that they work harder in school and take harder classes and learn things that non-engineers could never grasp. They go back to their dorm rooms to find their liberal arts majors planing a weekend of debauchery while they are working out a schedule for babysitting their lab experiment that counts as half their grade.
After that they just assume that everyone around them is stupid so they have to figure stuff out on their own.
I was blessed to have mentors that warned me of this. We worked with good-ole-boy developers and I was told to never underestimate the intelligence of a guy who couldn't form a proper english sentence to save his life but would be making millions on the land deal we were helping him with. It was a good lesson to sit back and think more about what makes someone "smart".
That is an interesting question............. OK not all engineers (or even that many) are bible thumping idiots who think they've proved Einstein wrong but the profession does have a noted link to woostery.
I believe it's down to knowing enough science to make mistakes through hubris but not knowing enough of the theoretical background to understand how little they really know. This also seems to apply to computer science/software engineering.
Hence the Salem Hypothesis.
Another problem is that of getting stuck in a rut. It would probably be wise to shift formulae and types of heroes every so often to avoid writing the same book over and over. For example, Koontz could help himself out by choosing as a hero someone more morally ambivalent and pushing him or her into a place where his or her seeking the easy and accommodating way will cost them someone they love, in one way or another. A skillful writer could keep this main character dancing on the edge until forced by a crisis to choose right - at great personal cost - over wrong. At the end of the story such a character would have grown exponentially, and their internal struggle, mirrored by an external one, would be truly heroic.
Of course, a counter argument is that Koontz sells, i.e. that even a book as badly written as Breathless, if it bears his name, will sell. Arguments that the work is inferior and that one should support decent authorship will, no doubt, be lost on the bean-counters. However, I would caution them that this phenomenon won't last forever and that subjecting potential best-selling authors to some discipline will extend their writing lives and, as a result increase profits.
I don't disagree with your point, but I wonder if his audience doesn't want him to be "better" - in fact they may simply want the same book over and over again.
I read an autobiography of musician Mark Everett some years ago and his one complaint about fans is that they really didn't want artists to grow, they seemed to want him to come out with another album just like the one they loved instead of coming up with something new for them to love. It was an interesting note in an overall excellent book, if you happen to like The Eels or biographies. The point is, I wonder if that isn't at play here, too.
That is the whole point about the formulaic end of fiction, isn't it?
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From 1988 until 1990 Jones wrote a regular column for the Sydney Sunday tabloid The Sun-Herald, but did not appear following a petition by staff calling for his removal as a contributor. This followed Jones' publication of a column predicting an oil crisis, in which a large amount of material had been taken from Frederick Forsyth's novel The Negotiator without attribution or indication that their source was a work of fiction.[40] Jones was later hired by the Sun-Herald's rival paper, The Sunday Telegraph, where he wrote a one-page column titled "To the Point" until 1995.[3][41]...
It's not wise to assume that a writer has the same belief system as his characters.