Skeptic Ginger
Nasty Woman
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The question mark is essential. I am not, not, NOT, NOT declaring that this monumental foul-up can be adequately explained by stupidity. That is precisely the point.
Rolfe.
Without knowing more about the issues, just going by the title, then neither works for me, with or without the "?". I know there are dozens of CTs about the incident. I know they had a guy in jail and it would seem let him out after making some kind of deal which was covered up with a claim of it being an humanitarian release.
Beyond that, until I read your book, I don't know where the "stupidity" comes in.
I suggest taking a step back from the declaration you want to make in the title and just focus on drawing the reader in. Just my opinion.
