kudos
You reiterate a lot of long-debunked claims in your post. I don't have time to address them here. You could use the search feature at jref and find many answers. With apologies, that's my total response, at least for the next day or so.
Your literary criticism is just that.It's pretty readable, yes, and it could be still pretty readable even if they had avoided the novel style. At some point it borders the mental "masturbation" about the obvious, and should be covering way more things. Especially what some credible people like former cia/fbi/military have promptly criticized and offered help. And what about the lots of testimonials documented by mainstream TV media about huge and powerful explosions that thrown some people away, lobby of the building completely destroyed and etc. Just gas tanks exploding inside the building way below the fire? And all that before the truth movement even start. In fact many of the explosion reports were given even before the buildings collapsed, talk about valid testimonial! Even if the comissioneers knew all of these people were talking crap, or were fraud and liars, they would do way better by including the odd claims there and then debunking them one by one, even if done in a drama style, because the claims were being made in a direct way , probably honestly by people who were by the crime scene. They had two years for that. That's the omissive part which many people got upset at. One should only hope you would at least respect their concerns, if you don't agree.
All in all , it's obvious that what they wrote, they probably got right. How couldn't they? They focused only in the hypothesis that it was simply a huge intelligence failure,in the most advanced intelligence system in the world, as to allow 19 hijackers to do that even if the growing number of terrorist alerts at that time is a fact. They simply did refuse though , to look at or include what many obviously credible people had to say and could possibly reveal other things. We can debate over they being credible or not, but it wouldn't go anywhere. We'd better have the actual people debating between themselves in an extensive report as why this laughable security failure occurred and how the mysterious and numerous explosions claims had to be all wrong. It's not surprising that most of those people I mentioned became truthers after being thoroughly ignored.
The above is my opinion, and I'm glad you finally understood what I was talking about, i.e. not trying to prove that the report didn't fulfill their own promise, but rather stating that imo it was a silly promise, to be kind.
You reiterate a lot of long-debunked claims in your post. I don't have time to address them here. You could use the search feature at jref and find many answers. With apologies, that's my total response, at least for the next day or so.