Your abstractions are misleading. Sure, you can talk about evolution in terms of mechanics, but it's misleading and you would be better off discussing it in terms of biology. This is true just as I can talk about comets in terms of communication, but it's misleading and I would be better off discussing it in terms of astrophysics.
As a teacher of the subject, I am telling you that the analogies are very helpful for most people... particularly young people who understand computer code. In many ways DNA is like a computer code that says make the organisms that are best at copying me. That's the algorithm...the traits that develop, develop because they were the traits of the best copiers. Technology evolves based on what came before. The internet evolves... complexity evolves all the time so long as information or product is produced and pruned as the environment (or market) allows.
Think of human bartering and the first monetary type of exchange... clams or gold etc. Now think of how currency has evolved... it's often JUST electronic data... nothing anyone even touches... it's information... it's an information system that evolved due to the environment of humans... DNA is an information system that makes life forms and sets them free in an environment to compete and live and reproduce and die and then hone the DNA from the successors via the future. Technology such as airplanes are machines designed to help humans travel across distances in relatively short amounts of time. Their design evolves based on the technology available, the cost, the money making potential, the regulations, and so forth. It's the information that evolves-- just like the body of knowledge we call science... the blueprint, the design, the output, the possibilities-- based on environmental inputs through time.
Most people intuit can intuit this analogy even if some people here can't-- I see it all the time. Most are like Southwind. Cyborg is very crisp and clear and on target. Animals do not evolve in their lifetime just as your car doesn't turn into another car. But the the successful animals of today have a chance of having their genomes in the successful species that comes next. And the successful cars of today will spawn similar designs and technology and inputs in future models.
What is the internet? It's a massive compendium of human information that evolves, isn't it? How does it do so? Is anyone planning this internet thing? Is anyone in charge?
If you can understand how the evolution of technology or the internet is similar to the evolution of life on this planet, you have unlocked a very important and useful understanding that can be applied to many things--including cosmology. In fact, Neil Tyson Degrasse mentions this very thing. And it's very useful knowledge that is some of the most amazing information humans have figured out. Don't assume that because you don't get it... or a few physicists on this forum don't get it, that it's not very useful for people in general. I think it's sad if you don't get it... but I have not seen creationists abuse this argument--what they tend to do is to make evolution sound impossible-- I think the analogy shows just how possible it is to humans who can't wrap their mind around a million years. The last 20 years in technology--especially computers allows for a great analogy of exponential growth of information storage, copying, and retrieval-- DNA has done the same over billions of years.
You have provided nothing that works for undoing creationist thinking with your pedantry--not that anything will...especially in creationist men over 40 (I've never seen one capable of understanding)--but in young plastic minds who think evolution is "too complex" to understand thanks to jumble mouthed men like Behe and those such as the pedants here who think they understand the best way to explain the process-- this analogy works very very well. I am sure Cyborg and Southwind could take a bunch of budding creationists and really get them to change their thinking. I suspect those who are up in arms about the analogy would have little or no measure of success, because they really don't understand evolution as well as they think they do. Think of the big picture--the generalities--the similarities--the model.
Your focus on the differences reminds me of the creationist hyperfocus on "randomness". You miss the forest for the trees. But maybe you just "cant" get it just like a hard core creationists can't "understand" how it could look designed but not be (or rather be "designed" from the bottom up by natural selection--like technology)