Bob Klase
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Years ago I read Fatal Vision- the Joe Joe McGinniss book about Jeffrey MacDonald. I was also in the army when the murders happened and remember some of the news about the case. Not long ago I read a more recent book about the murders titled Fatal Justice. While it didn't fully convince me that MacDonald was innocent, it did raise doubts about whether he might have been railroaded.
So, while looking for more recent information to see if anything had changed since that book was written in 1995 I stumbled onto a site about 'Statement Analysis' run by Mark McClish (a federal law enforcement officer for 25 years) and read his analysis of MacDonald's statement made shortly after the murders.
http://www.statementanalysis.com/macdonald/
Ignoring the MacDonald case specifically, just reading this analysis makes we wonder if I'm being too critical of the analysis or if this really is the b.s. passing for investigation that it appears on first look to be (to me anyway)? I'm sure that there are people who, with experience, can make better than average guesses about when someone is lying. But just from reading the wording of a statement as in this example?
Just a couple examples from the analysis (there are many more. I suppose you really need to read the whole thing because my taking small bits out of context could be misleading).
MacDonald's Statement: “Let’s see. Monday night my wife went to bed, and I was reading.“
McClish's Analysis: “MacDonald does not introduce his wife by name. If you are with a friend and you meet another friend, it would be considered rude if you do not introduce them to each other. The same thing applies when writing. It is impolite not to introduce a character. This is an indication that something is wrong with the relationship.“
My Opinion: It seems very reasonable to me that when you're making a statement for the police about your wife's recent murder that you would assume your dead wife needs no introduction to the people who are supposed to be investigating her murder.
MacDonald's Statement: “my little girl Kristy had gone into bed with my wife. And I went in to go to bed, and the bed was wet. She had wet the bed on my side, so I brought her in her own room.“
McClish's Analysis: “I brought her in her own room." This is an unusual way to say that he carried his child to her room. It sounds as if he is carrying a body.“
My Opinion: This seems to be lose-lose for MacDonald. If he had said "I carried her to her own room" then the analysis would be "carried her- that's what you do with a body". Not sure what other word would even fit.
MacDonald's Statement: “And so, I sat up and at first I thought I was — I just could see three people“
McClish's Analysis: “Three is a liar's number. When deceptive people have to come up with a number, they will often use the number three. If MacDonald did kill his wife and two kids, then we can see that he did struggle with three people.“
My Opinion: And if there really were other 3 people? And didn't the police say that 3 people murdered? Are the police being deceptive about the number of murders that night? Seems like something to keep in mind- if you're ever attacked by 3 people, be sure to tell the police there were only 2, or 4.
MacDonald's Statement: “And this guy started walking down between the coffee table and the couch“
McClish's Analysis: “And this guy started walking..." The word "walking" is a very casual term for someone who is moving throughout your house attacking you and your family. If a struggle took place, we would expect to see language such as "ran" "moved" "came." The word "started" means the guy did not complete the act. (walking) “
My Opinion: 'Ran' might be a good word if the guy ran. If MacDonald used 'moved' or 'came' then would the analysis have said he should have used 'walk'. And "I started (walking/cooking/thinking/etc) seems like a pretty common phrase to me. I hope everyone that ever says they started doing something hasn't been lying to me. Just this afternoon I started to read a book.
And in the analysis McClish says "walking is very casual for someone who is moving". Isn't 'moving' also a very casual term for what he's saying?
There's much more, but the whole thing strikes me as similar to the "analysis" of Puff the Magic Dragon (and Peter Yarrow's counter 'analysis' of the national anthem) from several years ago.
I'd really love to see some of his Analysis's on statements made by people who were widely considered guilty but (after the analysis) were later proved innocent beyond all doubt. Or vice versa.
So, while looking for more recent information to see if anything had changed since that book was written in 1995 I stumbled onto a site about 'Statement Analysis' run by Mark McClish (a federal law enforcement officer for 25 years) and read his analysis of MacDonald's statement made shortly after the murders.
http://www.statementanalysis.com/macdonald/
Ignoring the MacDonald case specifically, just reading this analysis makes we wonder if I'm being too critical of the analysis or if this really is the b.s. passing for investigation that it appears on first look to be (to me anyway)? I'm sure that there are people who, with experience, can make better than average guesses about when someone is lying. But just from reading the wording of a statement as in this example?
Just a couple examples from the analysis (there are many more. I suppose you really need to read the whole thing because my taking small bits out of context could be misleading).
MacDonald's Statement: “Let’s see. Monday night my wife went to bed, and I was reading.“
McClish's Analysis: “MacDonald does not introduce his wife by name. If you are with a friend and you meet another friend, it would be considered rude if you do not introduce them to each other. The same thing applies when writing. It is impolite not to introduce a character. This is an indication that something is wrong with the relationship.“
My Opinion: It seems very reasonable to me that when you're making a statement for the police about your wife's recent murder that you would assume your dead wife needs no introduction to the people who are supposed to be investigating her murder.
MacDonald's Statement: “my little girl Kristy had gone into bed with my wife. And I went in to go to bed, and the bed was wet. She had wet the bed on my side, so I brought her in her own room.“
McClish's Analysis: “I brought her in her own room." This is an unusual way to say that he carried his child to her room. It sounds as if he is carrying a body.“
My Opinion: This seems to be lose-lose for MacDonald. If he had said "I carried her to her own room" then the analysis would be "carried her- that's what you do with a body". Not sure what other word would even fit.
MacDonald's Statement: “And so, I sat up and at first I thought I was — I just could see three people“
McClish's Analysis: “Three is a liar's number. When deceptive people have to come up with a number, they will often use the number three. If MacDonald did kill his wife and two kids, then we can see that he did struggle with three people.“
My Opinion: And if there really were other 3 people? And didn't the police say that 3 people murdered? Are the police being deceptive about the number of murders that night? Seems like something to keep in mind- if you're ever attacked by 3 people, be sure to tell the police there were only 2, or 4.
MacDonald's Statement: “And this guy started walking down between the coffee table and the couch“
McClish's Analysis: “And this guy started walking..." The word "walking" is a very casual term for someone who is moving throughout your house attacking you and your family. If a struggle took place, we would expect to see language such as "ran" "moved" "came." The word "started" means the guy did not complete the act. (walking) “
My Opinion: 'Ran' might be a good word if the guy ran. If MacDonald used 'moved' or 'came' then would the analysis have said he should have used 'walk'. And "I started (walking/cooking/thinking/etc) seems like a pretty common phrase to me. I hope everyone that ever says they started doing something hasn't been lying to me. Just this afternoon I started to read a book.
And in the analysis McClish says "walking is very casual for someone who is moving". Isn't 'moving' also a very casual term for what he's saying?
There's much more, but the whole thing strikes me as similar to the "analysis" of Puff the Magic Dragon (and Peter Yarrow's counter 'analysis' of the national anthem) from several years ago.
I'd really love to see some of his Analysis's on statements made by people who were widely considered guilty but (after the analysis) were later proved innocent beyond all doubt. Or vice versa.
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