JayUtah
Penultimate Amazing
Well, we get this...For example, does the author actually *characterize* Voronin as morbidly obese, or does he just give a numerical weight? Because the latter could well turn out to be a typo. Perhaps he weighed 215 lbs, or 145 lbs.
...although it's unclear how Nelson knew this. Did he ask? Did he just eyeball it?Nelson writes, 'Alexander who weighed 245 pounds...'
And why such a specific figure? It's unlikely Voronin would have known his weight in pounds and it's unlikely he would have reported it in pounds when asked. 245 pounds doesn't equate to a round figure in kilograms, and people tend to report their weights in round figures—10s and 5s. Conversely if you're going to eyeball someone's weight, can you really eyeball a large person's weight to a 5-pound tolerance?For that matter, why would he mention the guy's weight at all? What is the context? What's the point?
If you're going to write a character-driven fictionalization, it makes sense to physically describe your characters. A description like...
...doesn't seem inappropriate to me. Dashiell Hammett describes Sam Spade in enough detail for us to conclude that he didn't look anything like Humphrey Bogart. Congruently he describes Caspar Gutman in similar detail, enough for us to know that Sydney Greenstreet (~360 lbs) was a good casting choice :—and earlier, 'A Russian giant with a heavy shock of graying [sic] hair and beard...' ''a heavy-shouldered bear of a man...'
The fat man was flabbily fat with bulbous pink cheeks and lips and chins and neck, with a great soft egg of a belly that was all his torso, and pendant cones for arms and legs. As he advanced to meet Spade all his bulbs rose and shook and fell separately with each step, in the manner of clustered soap-bubbles not yet released from the pipe through which they had been blown. His eyes, made small by fat puffs around them, were dark and sleek.
In contrast, my company's statistician is 6′ 2″ tall (that's 188 cm, or six minutes and two seconds, for you non-Americans) and 250 lbs (by his estimate). He's what I might consider slightly overweight, but by no means "morbidly obese." He regularly comes along on company mountain hikes (i.e., up and down mountains) with no signs of distress. I'm fairly certain he could get in and out of a boat safely, mostly because I've seen him get in and out of boats with ease on Bear Lake and he's quite a passable sailor on the various fore-and-aft rigs we sail there. I can drink him under the table, but that's probably not the flex I want it to be.
Here's a guy from my summer theater program years ago who's now a stuntman at Disney in Florida. He plays the huge German mechanic (the Pat Roach character) that Indy fights around the flying-wing airplane. We were gym buddies until he moved away. He's well over six feet tall and well over 250 lbs. I'm pretty sure he could bench-press lifeboat, and I have no problem describing him as a "heavy-shouldered bear of a man." He's clearly not "morbidly obese," and I dare you to call him that to his face.

Voronin's demise eight years later is no evidence of some malingering condition that must have afflicted him while he was on Estonia. My father was a very active outdoorsman before contracting the illness that killed him two years later.
"A Russian giant" and "a heavy-shouldered bear of a man" is a pretty sad attempt to justify the notion that Voronin was some kind of invalid whose presence on a lifeboat is suspicious for health or physical reasons.
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