Normally when I get Cthulhu Mythos books, I stick to anthologies of stories by multiple authors instead of single author books, unless I'm familiar with the author, generally through anthologies. For example, I have Brian McNaughton's "Throne of Bones" and the collections of David Conyers' Harrison Peel stories because I had read some of their stories in various anthologies. Based on the short stories I've read in anthologies, it's highly unlikely I'll buy a book that's entirely Poppy Z. Brite. With multiple authors, I'll probably like something in it, and I probably won't hate everything.
I broke that rule with
Cthulhu's Reach - Lovecraftian Horror on the Ocean Floor by Sean Benoit, and I'm regretting it. It's only 119 pages, which is good, because I'm less than 20 pages in and it is painful. Based on the credits, it's self-published, which shouldn't surprise me.
In the first two pages of the first story, there's an "as you know" exposition dump and a paragraph that both tells and shows something. The leader of a diving expedition says "let's go over our roles once more" and then names everyone in the group and their specialty, because they may have forgotten who they are. "As the descent continued, Amelia revealed her past trauma to the crew. "I know this mission is risky, but I need to do this. I lost my brother on a previous mission, and I've been haunted by his death ever since. I need to prove to myself that I can handle this and that his death wasn't in vain."" If you have dialogue in which she reveals her trauma, you don't need to say that she's revealing her trauma. Her brother is never mentioned again, by the way.
The characters "can't shake the feeling that ______" four or five times in a dozen pages.
The characters are on a submarine exploring an ocean chasm and find ruins and an underwater city, but the writer can't decide if they're underwater or if they're somehow in an air-filled area that is never mentioned. They find a "faded journal" left by a previous expedition in the city. They're underwater!! It would be a lot more than faded. At one point they walk across a treacherous bridge while strong winds are blowing, and then immediately swim to the surface. Then when they reach the surface, they look around at the ruins of the underwater city, that was supposedly down in the chasm.
The entity they encounter is defeated ... somehow. Something to do with the marine biologist's equipment. It's never really said. Several times situations are explained using references to objects that the characters found earlier, but they were never actually shown finding those objects. "As they continued to search for a solution, they stumbled upon another shocking discovery. Dr. Rodriguez had uncovered a journal that belonged to the underwater city's founder, and it contained information about the entity's origin and plans." I wonder how they were even able to read it.
The dialogue is stilted, at best. It's often different characters saying the same things in slightly different ways. "We have to hold on. We can't let it take us down." "We have to fight back. We can't let it win."
"We need to warn others about the dangers that lie in the depths of the ocean. The entity may be gone, but there are still other threats out there, waiting to strike."
And that's just the first story. If I'm never seen here again, the book killed me.
EDIT: The second story has characters being pulled underwater, while in an
underwater temple!! This is almost "
Eye of Argon" territory.
EDIT 2: Either my previous edit unlocked the secret of this book or I've gone mad. Either is possible. I'm now laughing out loud while reading it. It
is a Cthulhu Mythos version of "The Eye of Argon". The stories are so bad they loop back around to hilarious.